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52 Week SWS Challange - Write a six word story that reads from left to right and right to left and still have it make sense!
I tried to make this appear like a circle that never ended; a story that never ended. It is sort of like revenge--there's always someone new.
The first way, from left to right, shows that someone who's committed murder made victims "who seek retribution". I reworded it to fit the 6-word limit "victims seeking retribution". This way, instead of a verb, it is changed to an adjective.
The second way, from right to left, shows that the victims also had their own bloody hands. By seeking revenge, they also had obtained the same result as the offender.
The story continues on an on, with a person continuing the sequence no matter what, because someone was always hurt.
52 Week SWS Challange - Write a six word story that reads from left to right and right to left and still have it make sense!
I tried to make this appear like a circle that never ended; a story that never ended. It is sort of like revenge--there's always someone new.
The first way, from left to right, shows that someone who's committed murder made victims "who seek retribution". I reworded it to fit the 6-word limit "victims seeking retribution". This way, instead of a verb, it is changed to an adjective.
The second way, from right to left, shows that the victims also had their own bloody hands. By seeking revenge, they also had obtained the same result as the offender.
The story continues on an on, with a person continuing the sequence no matter what, because someone was always hurt.
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The idea of the never ending circles is great and you depicted it perfectly. Respect.
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